#12 "Reflect on Peer Review"

For my peer review, I received a constructed series of questions and answers, along with a letter regarding my paper.  They were helpful in a sense that the editor picked out several sentences were that were hard to read.  They were also insightful as to what points I should really emphasize and talk about more.  Both editors said that I need to strengthen my transition sentences.  I struggled with this in my previous essay.